The Kite Runner post 3

Baba sounds like a really strong Character emotionaly and physicly, i picture him big and muscular because he was able to life Karim by the neck and joke him. That was a pretty intense short little scene. But also there was still a couple of alliteration in the story and i think its the authors trade mark. Its hard to write a book to begin with but to put allot of alliterations must be harder.